Born on Feb 26, 1982, Li Na has a gift for sports from her childhood. She began to practice badminton at the age of six and was introduced to play tennis when she was nine. In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university, but two years later she returned. With the help /(Under the guidance ) of some famous coaches, including her husband /Following the instructions of several famous coaches, she has been making greater and greater achievements/ progress/ improvement(s) rapidly. As a result she won the 2011 French Open singles title, becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.

题目分析：这是提纲类短文，根据要点简单介绍李娜的基本情况。文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难度不大，在写作的时候也不能逐字逐句的翻译，要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，形成一个整体。选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。如：In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university, but two years later she returned.及. As a result she won the 2011 French Open singles title, becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.都是很好的句式。

点评：提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。但是一定要地道的英语表达法，在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。不要过分堆砌。