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Should parents be banned from entering campus?

Recently, campus security has become a hot issue. To ensure security, strangers are banned from entering campus by our school, and a survey has been made among the students about whether parents should be included. 

According to the survey, 60℅ of the students think parents should be included because it is a rule everyone should obey. Another 25℅ subscribe to the view that there is no need for the ban as their beloved parents couldn’t be a danger to anyone. However, the rest think the guards can make a proper decision depending on certain situations.

Personally, I agree with the first. As the saying goes, to forestall is better than to amend. Proper measures should be taken before it’s too late. As for parents, they have some other ways to keep in touch with their children, like making calls or asking for teachers’ help. All in all, campus security calls for everyone’s concern and cooperation. 

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