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                                                         The Person I Admire Most

     The person I admire most now is Hu Jingtao. I admire him not because of his power but because he has

done so many good things for the Chinese people, and for our country. God bless him, my admired man.

     I admire him because he can run such a big country as ours so Well. Since he came into power, he has

made lots of laws and policies that show the Chinese people are the masters of the country. It is he that leads

China to win one victory after another during the recent years. Under his wise leadership, many dreams of

the Chinese have come true.

     I admire him because he loves his people and his country. Wherever a difficult situation appears, he is

always, there. He was in South China when there was a serious flood years ago. And he was in Wenchuan

where the terrible Wenchuan earthquake happened.

     People don't just think about him as a great leader of our country but one of our devoted friends.