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   Success

    What is success? Different people hold views on it.

Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal

of money. Others argue that success means holding an impor-

tant government post. Still others believe that whoever has got

high academic title is successful.

      However,successful people usually have some good qual-

ities in common. You should first of all be both perseverant

and hardworking. As you know,whatever you do,there are al-

ways two possible results: success and failure. When you

fail,you should never lose heart. You should always keep in

mind that failure is the mother of success. In addition,you

should pay great attention to your work method. It is necessa-

ry for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve

the efficiency of your work.  Also,it is important for you to get

along well with your co-workers,care for each other and help

each other.

     In my opinion,success means achieving brilliant results

in one's work,that is; making outstanding contributions to the

development of the country and hringing happiness to the peo-

ple. That's the success in one's life.