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     In recent days,a discussion is being carried on about whether

the Golden Week should be cancelled.

     Some people agreed to cancel the Golden Week. They pointed

out that nationwide traveling has put big pressure on transportation,

tourist safety and the environment. The Golden Week resulted in

crowded scenic spots and packed hotels, making the quality of service

decline.

     However,other people argued the Golden Week had encouraged

people to spend more during the seven-day holiday, so it had

brought huge profits to the nation's tourist industry and promoted

the economic growth.

     Despite the fact that voices calling for its cancellation are becoming

even stronger,1 still think people need to relax and a common vacation

time is very important. But the government should

take into consideration not only incomes, but also the satisfaction of

those who take the holiday.