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It’s well-known to us that such universities as Beijing University will admit some freshmen recommended by their headmasters. Of course it is well praised in most of the schools. However，it is also resulting in much doubt. Its advantages and the disadvantages may be listed as follows.

Some hold the view that it will play a leading role of managing to reforming our present education admission system only decided by the scores in the National Examination. Besides，it does great good to accepting some students with personal preferences. For example，some students have a gift for science，technology，or inventing while they may be poor in other subjects or may not achieve satisfactory score in the Examination. As a result of the low score，they are sure to be refused by the key universities.

On the contrary，it is true that some show much doubt of its honesty from headmasters or the justice when the students are recommended. Sometimes, deciding who to be recommended，the headmasters may be influenced by other abnormal factors from inside or outside the school in China.

In my opinion，I think it must be  a good try and of great benefit if the headmasters can avoid the disadvantages，such as the unjustice, dishonesty.