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The 60th National Day is coming along with the splendid celebration in Beijing. In the past 60 years, Great changes have taken place, which makes us proud of being a Chinese. The progress in all kinds of fields, especially the development of economy sees the prosperity in China. As we can see, more and more tall buildings have been built everywhere and every common person lives a happy life. What’s more, there are a larger number of foreign tourists visiting China. As a modern student, I take pride in my motherland. So we should work hard and try our best to make contributions to the development of our country and show our peaceful hopes to the world. I think we can make China greatest among all the countries in the world.