第二节书面表达（共1题，满分25分）
假设你叫刘明，高三学生，即将参加高考。你的英语其他题都做得不错，但是作文总是写不好。你给在你学校工作过的外籍老师David英语写作这一问题向他请教，并请他帮忙批改你附上的作文，指出问题的所在，怎么改进。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.在内容上允许适当发挥;
3.参考词汇：附 attached to
Dear David,
I’m in Senior 3 now and I’m preparing for the coming college entrance examination. I’m sure I can answer all the questions in NMET except the writing. I have put my heart into English writing, but I still don’t know how to write a good composition. What shall I do? You know, the college entrance examination is very important. I’m getting more and more worried with the time passing by. So I want to get some help from you. I believe you are kind enough to help, aren’t you? The composition attached to the Email is one of mine. Would you please correct it, point out the mistakes and tell me how to improve my writing? Thank you!
Yours,
Liu Ming