In recent years, because of the phenomenon that more and more people want to learn English, and English is popular among many people, a lot of kindergardens  provide English classes for children.

However, the view some experts hold is that it’s inappropriate for kids to learn English too early. First of all, they should have a good knowledge of Chinese, which is their mother tongue.

In my opinion, whether English classes should be included in kindergardens remains to be seen. As children, they should have a happy childhood. We shouln’t put too much pressure on them. Just return happiness to children.

这篇书面表达是根据话题写作，话题是：近年来学习英语热持续升温，许多幼儿园开设了英语课的问题，这也是第一段的内容。第二段写许多专家的观点。第三段按要求写作者自己的观点，要有理有据。文章层次分明，句型多样：because of the phenomenon that more and more people want to learn English, and English is popular among many people, 这是同位语从句，However, the view that some experts hold is it’s inappropriate for kids to learn English too early.这是表语从句 whether English classes should be included in kindergardens remains to be seen.这是主语从句。