Sep 20,2012

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among some students: littering and smoking. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. Moreover, as teenagers, we shouldn't smoke. Smoking is harmful to our health. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and smoking. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

本文是一篇对生活中存在的乱扔垃圾等不良现象进行批评的半开放性作文，文章只是给出一个纲要，需要考生去添加和整理，给考生留的空间比较大，在写作的目的上可以写是为了营造一个更好的生活环境，同时批评这些行为。最关键的是提出的建议，要加强教育宣传的力度，要大家共同努力。在写作的时候要注意使用高级词汇，合适的连接词和高级的句型让文章更有文采更流畅。