Dear everyone,

“The low carbon lifestyle” programme is right now taking place in our school, and I’d like to give some advice to both teachers and students in our life. First, I recommend that we walk, ride or take a public bus to school. Second, every time we want to buy something, we can make full use of the recycled bags to replace the plastic bags, which will protect our environment. Meanwhile, it would be more beneficial if paper could be used to full extent, namely, we must write on both sides. Furthermore, with energy crisis threatening our lives, water and electricity, two of our major necessities, have to be consumed wisely and economically. Every effort from us can make a real difference. I believe that we can lead a healthy and sustainable low carbon life.

Thanks for your concern. I hope my suggestions practical and helpful and that everyone will be glad to join in and try our best to form a harmonious relationship with the environment. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　          　                                                                                                                                                                             

Li  Yue

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点评：半开放性作文的写作对考生来说是一个难点，要根据大纲自己发现要点，本文的难点在于运用合适的词汇和句型来表达语义，因为以前的提纲类作文的思维量不大，本文要求考生自己谋篇布局，组织文章的上下文结构。写作时要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，使之成为一个整体。