假设你是李华,你的朋友Lily正在上中学,她感到学习压力很大,她向你询问有关怎样减压的建议,请根据下面表格内的提示用英文写一封回信,
注意: 1.开头和结尾已给出; 2.词数:100个左右; 3.参考词汇:压力pressure; 建议suggestion; 作运动 do sports exercise Dear Lily, In the letter, you asked me something about your study pressure. Yours, LiHua. |
Dear Lily,
In the letter, you asked me something about study pressure. It's a big problem which needs to solve. I have some suggestions for you.
In order to relax ourselves,first we can turn to some of our hobbies,different students have different ways --- Some watch TV,some listen to music. But for me I enjoy taking exercise most. Whenever I feel tired,I always spend an hour (in) walking or jogging in the park. Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends after class. In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies. I think it’s really helpful to both my health and my study. Last but not least, to be confident and believe yourselves. Confidence can help you to study easier.
I hope you can treat pressure properly. If you can do it like this, you will succeed sooner or later.
Yours,
LiHua.
题目分析:考查提纲类短文写作。在分析原因的时候可以从升学压力大,父母要求高,学校对于学习抓得很紧等方面着手。在写作原因和建议的时候,一定要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点,使之成为一个整体,最后一段要表明要正确面对压力,要有正确的心态和减压的措施。
点评:提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括在内,不能有遗漏。要合理的谋篇布局,准确的分段分析,使用合适的连接词来连接全文,运用高级的词汇和句型让文章更有文采。