Dear Li Hua,

I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn English well. Here are my suggestions for your reference.

First, it is important to work hard at English, because there is a saying goes，“No pains ,no gains.” Then it also helps if you watch TV and read books, magazines, newspapers in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing English songs. For by doing so you’ll learn and remember English words more easily. You can also make friends with foreigners. I am quite sure that they will tell you a lot about English and help you learn English.

Please try and write to me in English next time.

Sincerely yours,

Peter

题目分析：本文非常简单，是关于如何学好英语的建议。在文字提示中，各种建议都给了出来，在写作的时候要使用连接词把各个建议连接起来，如first, second，then等，让各个要点成为一个有机的整体。同时也可以使用高级的谚语如：“No pains ,no gains.”等。可以大大提示文章的档次。

点评：本文从形式上来说，属于应用文中的书信。同时也属于提纲类作文，因为要点都给了出来，在立意上没有太大的难度。要注意不要遗漏要点，要把所有的内容都包括在内。本篇范文中的“No pains ,no gains.用的很好，以后在写作的时候可以由意识的多运用谚语。