My Idea of Future Life

What will life be like in the future? I think transportation will become cleaner, faster and safer. Cars will be controlled by computers. As for business, online shopping will become more and more popular. People may also go to a mall which combines shopping with fun. With the development of medicine, the way diseases are treated will be changed and genes may be used as a cure. Distance education will help people study whenever they have time and wherever they may be, so it will be more convenient for personal study.

In a word , I’m sure our future life will become far better than today.

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