We should express opinions on our teachers in a right way

Last week there was a heated discussion about whether we should express freely our opinions on our teachers in our school’s post bar. Different students have various opinions on it. Here are their words:

A majority of the students think that the teachers must be worth respecting permanently. Besides, it is mean that one person make any irresponsible comments behind on others, especially our loved teachers. As a senior student, we should learn how to make a deep communication with our teachers when we have any dissatisfaction to our teachers.

There is no denying that some students have different opinions and their behaviors. They think that only in this way can they express their real thought and feelings freely and safely. On the other hand, if a student makes much complaint to teachers face to face, it will bring much embarrass to our teachers. 

In my opinion, we shouldn’t stab our teacher in the back; we should be honest to exchange our inside words with our teachers, which can make the two sides of us beneficial.

题目分析：本篇书面表达为正反方议论文。讨论有些学生在学校贴吧上发表对老师不满的言语的行为，要写出认为是错误的观点和认为是恰当的观点，及自己的观点，文章结构为：引入句→②正方观点阐述→ƒ反方观点阐述→④自己的观点，论述两种不同观点主要是结合要点写，要注意遣词造句，自己的看法没有要点要学生自己发挥。要求学生有很好的英语思维能力。

点评：正反方议论文结构典型，要记住基本结构，另外多记忆一些模板句。写作时可以套用一些固定格式，但里面的内容句式要富于变化，层次清晰，语句连贯。