假若如你是新华中学的学生李华。周五下午,你最喜欢的Carter教授将举行题为“How to be a good language learner”的报告,但你因在新东方(New Orient)培训学校学习不能参加。请你根据以下提示给你的同学David写一封电子邮件:
1.解释原因:
2.表达遗憾;
3.要求Daivd对报告内容录音。
注意:
1.词数:120字左右。
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
How are you?
I've learned that Prof Carter is going to give us a talk on “How to be a good language learner next Friday afternoon. He is my favorite teacher, you know, but unfortunately, I won't be able to attend the lecture as I am now studying English in New Orient Training School in Beijing, and I won't get back when the lecture begins. So I wish you could give me a hand to make up for the loss. Could you please make a recording of the lecture? At least I can listen to the lecture when I go back, and moreover, if I have any questions, I hope to get satisfactory answers from you. I would appreciate it if you could do me the favour. Many thanks.
Look forward to seeing you again soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题目分析:这是一封电子邮件,写的时候用书信的格式,内容要点给出了一个提纲,要考生自己拓展,要选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思,可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。So I wish you could give me a hand to make up for the loss.这句话使用了虚拟语气, I would appreciate it if you could do me the favour.这句话的it做形式主语用的很好,还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点,使文章成为一个整体。
点评:除了注意书信的格式,表达方式的选择和要点的完备也很重要,要点不能有遗漏或者省略。也不能按照表格写出提纲式,所以在写作的时候要变换句式,同时要注意因为是邮件要写得亲切直白。不要过去堆砌。