假如你是某班班长，最近你和班委们要组织一次郊游，有关本次活动的信息如下：
请你根据上面表格提供的信息，向同学们介绍组织这次郊游的原因和目的等情况，动员全班同学参加这次活动。 【写作要求】 1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 2. 文章的开头和结尾已经为你写好（所给句子不计入5个句子之中）。 【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整和连贯。 参考词汇： 高考 College Entrance Examination We have decided to go for an outing to Baiyun Mountain this weekend. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all the students can take part in the activity. |
As we all know, we senior 3 students are so busy preparing for the coming College Entrance Examination that we are faced with great pressure and have little time to do something else. In order to keep a balance between work and rest, we think it’s good idea for us to get close to nature on the weekend to breathe the fresh air and enjoy the sunshine. By doing that, not only can we enjoy the beautiful scenery but we can also relax ourselves. Meanwhile, we can ease our pressure and make our study more efficient. Those who want to take part in the outing are expected to meet at the school gate an 8:00 this Sunday morning .
题目分析：考查应用文写作。本文是一篇介绍郊游信息的短文，本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文在审题时要注意人称和时态，要使用第一人称来写。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。