Dear Liu Jie,

Haven’t seen you for months! I am extremely happy to know that you have been admitted to Shanghai International Studies University!Congratulations!

There is no doubt that you have devoted a lot to your studies, for which I admire you much! I still remember you told me that if one wants to achieve success, her must have a plan first, and then, stick to it. I will do as you told me.

Now, it is my turn to realize my goal in the coming college entrance examination. I will try my best to work hard and I believe I can also get excellent results like you. Please wait for my good news. I won’t disappoint you.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

题目分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。