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September 28, Monday                               Fine

Yesterday was September 27th, the World Tourism Day. I paid a visit to the Spouting Spring Park with several classmates. After an hour’s ride, we arrived there. As soon as we got there, we began to  enjoy the beautiful scenery. Besides, we sang happily and played some interesting games. All of us enjoyed ourselves very much.

After we had our picnic at noon, we found some immoral behaviors in public that some visitors throw rubbish everywhere and even damage the branches and flowers. we decided to organize an activity on this special day, talking to the visitors about the importance of protecting the environment and try to be civilized visitors. At about 3 in the afternoon we returned.

We not only had a good time but also did a good deed today. Though I am tired now, I felt quite happy.

题目分析：日记是记叙当天自己亲身经历的一些重要的、有意义的事情。因此，在写作时应注意日记必须用第一人称"I"进行叙述。另外，由于日记中所记叙的事情已经发生，所以整篇日记的时态常用过去时态。当然，在直接引语中或在表示客观真理或事实时仍然要用一般现在时。英文日记要求以日记的形式进行表达，其题目的形式有时是看图作文，有时是表格作文，有时是提示作文。无论是哪种形式的，写作前都要注意仔细审题，抓住要点，理清叙述的顺序。写作时正文的开头一般不用写表示日期的句子，因为日记中已有日期，再写就重复了。另外，写作时如果没有把握，应尽量少用复合句，以免弄巧成拙。另外，书写时应注意卷面整洁，字迹清楚。

点评：考生不能遗漏要点要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。