问题 写作题

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Nowadays, " the sense of happiness" has been repeatedly mentioned in various medias.  CCTV did a nation-wide survey by asking random passers-by: " Are you happy now? What exactly is happiness in your eyes?" The survey aroused a heated discussion across the country and people from all walks of life expressed their opinions.

" I would say I'm pretty happy at present because my dear daughter has graduated from college and found herself a decent job. " said a woman in her fifties with a big smile on her face.

Though it seemed that most people said they were happy, different voices were still heard and should not be ignored. A migrant worker’s(农民工) reply was  "My family name is Zeng", showing his  determination to refuse the interview as well as his annoyance to mention happiness.

The brand-new Chinese Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan answered " I don't know " in an interview when he was asked the same question.

【写作内容】

1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120个词就“幸福”的话题谈谈你的想法,内容包括:

(1)目前你是否感到幸福及其原因;

(2)请描述到现在为止让你觉得最幸福的一件事情;

(3)谈谈你对幸福的理解。

【写作要求】

1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事.也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】 概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。

答案

When asked by the CCTV whether they were happy, most people gave a positive answer while some didn't. The Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan said he didn't know whether he was happy or not.

At present, I am pretty happy because I am doing what I like and I like what I am doing. As a Senior Three student, I am studying hard every day and live it to the fullest. It is good to work with my determined classmates to fulfill our dreams.

When I recall the happy things which happened to me, the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped them all. It was a time when my family was going through extreme financial difficulties. So I made up my mind to win the scholarship, hoping to lighten my parents' financial burden. After making tons of painstaking efforts, I succeeded. At the ceremony, I could see my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman, yet with the brightest smile. It was the happiest thing ever happening to me that I will treasure for the rest of my life.

As far as I am concerned, happiness lies in the effort of making those we love smile. When we bring them happiness , it gives happiness to ourselves.

题目分析:考查议论文写作。本文的话题是“幸福”;考生直接表达自己对于目前的情况是否感觉到幸福,同时说明自己的具体的原因。考生可以从自己生活中寻找一个让自己感觉幸福的事例来展开说明自己对幸福的理解;幸福其实就是一种自我价值的实现。要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。

点评:写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

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