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As was reported, March 10, 2013 saw a quarrel breaking out between an old man over 60 and a girl on a bus in Zhengzhou city. The reason was that the girl failed to give seat to him even after being hinted. What’s worse, the old man beat the girl in the end.

The incident indicates that some people’s morals are, to some extent, declining rapidly currently. On the one hand, the girl might be condemned for her indifference to the old man. It’s great virtue in China for the young to give seat to those who need it badly, such as the senior citizens, the disabled. On the other hand, the old man should take legal responsibility for his rude behavior. After all those underprivileged, even if not helped, are supposed to show forgiveness and gratitude.

In short, it’s everyone’s duty to improve social moral level, which is essential to create a harmonious society.

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