Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our city.

I'd like to tell you something about our city, Qingdao, which lies in the south of Shandong Peninsula. It covers an area of 10, 654 square kilometers and has a population of 6,990,000. When you come here, you will be attracted by the sea, which holds Qingdao in its arms. It is a beautiful world-famous city. Many ancient celebrities, such as Li Bai, Pu Songling, Kang Youwei have traveled to many of the places in Qingdao and have written beautiful poems and essays about their experiences. Besides, Qingdao is also a modern international city. It has many modern factories and tall buildings.

I'm sure you will have a good time here.

Thank you.

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