October 6th Wednesday            Cloudy

I’m back home after a three-day tour. On October 3rd during the long term of National Holidays, my friends and I made a trip to Niululing Nature Park to have sightseeing. We took the Yellow Tourist Express there, which was convenient and comfortable, with special room for our baggage. While touring there, we were drunk with the beauty of the scenic spots, such as the blue lake of Niululing Reservoir, the various trees and flowers around the mountains and even with the pleasant fresh air there. On the third day we returned. Each of us was deeply impressed by what we’d seen. Yet we were touched by the pollution at some spots and the litter thrown about by some tourists. ( 词数：113  )

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