最近学校成立了“自行车俱乐部”，下面是有关报名和第一次活动的安排，请以学生会 的名义写一则书面通知： 【写作内容】
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 |
You’re welcome to join the Bicycle Club, which has been set up in our school. All the students who want to join the club may register in the office of the Student’s Union on the fifth floor of Building 3 during 5:05 to 6:00 pm from next Monday to Friday.
The opening ceremony of the club will be held at 4:40 pm on April 28 in the office of PE center of our school. Then a lecture about the common knowledge of Guangdong greenway will be given. In addition, the expectation of the next activity will be announced after the talk about some repair work and how to ride a bicycle properly.
题目分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。