西藏是中国领土不可分割的一部分，这块具有神秘和传奇色彩的土地也引起了世界的关注。 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter打算今年暑假来中国西藏旅游，请你根据下表内容用英语向他简单地介绍有关西藏的一些基本情况。 [写作内容]
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入句子总数。 Dear Peter． I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit. I'm sure you will have a wonderful journey in such a great land. Looking forward to your coming to China． Yours， LiHua |
Dear Peter，
I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit．
Tibet，known as the“Roof of the World”，belongs to the People’s Republic of China and it is located in the southwest of China. It has a population of about 2.8 million，covering more than 1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which is honored as“the highest city”in the world. With a long history of more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. Since the liberation of Tibet on May 23，1951，it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture. I'm sure you will have a wonderful Journey in such a great land.
Looking forward to your coming to China．
Yours，
Li Hua
题目分析：考生首先要仔细审题，这是话题作文，要点已经给出，需要考生正确表达，写作难度不大。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息，如范文里面的句子：The capital city is Lhasa, which is honored as“the highest city”in the world..就包含了几个要点内容。也出现了非限制性定语从句的句子。
点评：作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合作文要求，句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，使用高级词汇及句型。