在最近的一次主题为“中学生上网”的班会上,同学们对上网的利弊争论不休, 不能统一。作为班长,请你根据下列信息,做出总结。
Attention,please!I’m going to give you a summary of today’s discussion about going online. |
不唯一
Attention, please! I’m going to give you a summary of today’s discussion about it.
Most students think we can go online as much as possible in our spare time. We can get the newest information both at home and abroad through the Internet. It is also convenient way for us to communicate with each other. In a word, the Internet makes our lives outside class colorful.
On the other hand, a few students only partly agree. They suggest a time limit on going online. They have found that many students go online only to play computer game. There are even one or two who are often absent from school for the days to spent time on the Internet.
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