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I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. While most of people nowadays like modern music such as rock and pop music, I like listening to classical music. For many people, they find classical music boring to listen. However, I think classical music is serious and can make people inspired. Unlike modern music, most of the classical music can last long. Every time I feel tired or anxious, classical music helps me calm down. Music plays an important part in my life. Music makes my life more colorful and gives me a lot of entertainment. More importantly, it makes me refreshed. If there were no music in the world, it would really be a boring and dull place!

题目分析：写作时认真审题，确定体裁。应注意以下几个方面。(1)时态错误：文章中忽视了动作发生的时间。(2)人称代词错误：单复数、形容词性物主代词与名词性物主代词错误。(3)名词单复数、动词单复数、主谓语不一致。(4)用词错误：对同义词的区别、使用场合、习惯用法不熟悉，或者忘记了单词。(5)内容不连贯：不会用关联词，语序混乱。没有统筹安排，写到哪里，就停在哪里。(6)大小写、标点符号错误，缺少冠词。(7)书写混乱，卷面潦草。

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点评：好作文应该是紧扣文章主题，遵循特定的文体格式，选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。