书面表达
根据以下内容和提示,写一封80—120字的信。
张蕾是武汉某大学2012届的毕业生,家住香港三路。他从报上获悉海鹏公司(Haipen Company)正在招聘一名具有商业经验、英语良好的职员(clerk)。她很高兴,希望应聘。张蕾给该公司经理(manager)林先生写信,想申请得到这个职位(go apply for …)。信中要简单介绍自己的情况:现年23岁,在大学学主修英语、电子商务(typing, communicating) 等课程,希望经理能容出几分钟时间准予面洽。假设你是张蕾,请根据提示内容用英语写一封信,写信日期是2013年7月18日。
No. 3 Hongkong Street
Wuhan
July 18th, 2004
Haipeng Company
Dear Mr. Lin,
I have learned from newspaper that you are looking for a clerk who has some general experience in business and English. I would like to apply for that position. I am 23 years old and a graduate of a university in 2004. At the university, I studied many subjects such as English in major, business ( typing and writing in shorthand ) . I have no problem in writing and speaking English, for I have always been dealing with foreigners in English.
I believe that I shall become fit for the job very soon.
If you can offer me a few minutes, I would like to talk to you.
Sincerely yours,
Zhang Lei
题目分析:考查书信类作文的写作。以张蕾名义给公司经理(manager)林先生写信,想申请得到这个职位,具体信息已经给出,考生需要需要注意书信的格式,写信人的地址和写信日期,收信人的地址,都要交代,要点适当串联即可,在写作的时候一定要使用合适的连接词来连接全文,让文章成为一个整体,同时要注意使用英语句型,也要使用倒装句,定语从句等特殊的句式来提高文章的多样性。如I have learned from newspaper that you are looking for a clerk who has some general experience in business and English.还要用适当的关联词把句与句连起来。
点评:本文属于书信类作文,此类作文要注意格式和要点要全面覆盖,不能有遗漏和省略。写作的时候运用多种表达方式,让句子有变化。