书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是Tom, 是一名高一新生。请你给自己的初中同学Jack写一封信,简要介绍自己的高中生活。
要点:
1)已经适应了高中的生活,并且交了好多朋友。
非常想念过去的老师和同学们;与现在的同学相处很好,对老师很满意。
自己一定努力学习,为的是三年以后能够上个好的大学。
注意:1)数80左右2)头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数
Dear Jack,
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Dear Jack,
How time flies! I have been in high school for a whole month. At the beginning of this term, I felt a little lonely. But now I have made many new friends. By now, I have got used to my new life here. I miss all the teachers and classmates in Junior Middle school. At the same time, I get along well with my new classmates. The teachers here are very humorous and I like them very much. I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.
Yours,
Tom
题目分析:考查应用文中的书信的写作。请你给自己的初中同学Jack写一封信,简要介绍自己的高中生活。要点都已经给出,审题时注意本文使用一般现在时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。象范文的I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.使用了because引导的原因状语从句和it做形式主语的句型,还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来,象Firstly. Secondly, Thirdly, At the same time等词,这样文章显得更连贯。
点评:书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括,不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。