请根据以下说明,使用5个规范的英语句子描述所给的全部内容。 假设你于4月23日的“世界读书日”(World Reading Day)在你所在的学校进行了一项关于阅读习惯的调查,以下是其中的一项调查结果。请用英语写一篇短文,说明相关内容及结果等。
[写作内容] 1.调查内容及时间。 2.调查结果。 3.问题:阅览室的使用率 (use rate) 不高。 4.建议: (1)延长阅览室的开放时间。 (2)书店送书到校,方便学生购买。 [写作要求] 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 [评分标准] 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ |
On World Reading Day, we carried out a survey about the reading habits of high school students.According to the survey, 45.75% of the students read books they buy and 8.5% of them download ebooks or read online.35.75% of the students borrow books from their friends or the library and 10% of them read in the school reading room.From the survey we can see that the use rate of the school reading room is not high enough.We suggest that its opening hours be lengthened and meanwhile bookstores be invited into the school to make it convenient for students to buy books.
题目分析:考查提纲作文,考生首先要仔细审题,包括以下几个方面:(1)层次结构,(2)句子的时态(3)内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位,这是半开放性作文,要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确,这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化,适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇,以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点,考生要多使用复杂句,一句话中多包含些信息,如范文里面的句子:We suggest that its opening hours be lengthened and meanwhile bookstores be invited into the school to make it convenient for students to buy books.
既有宾语从句,又有并列句。
点评:作文要层次清晰,要点全面,表达流畅,切合作文要求,句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色,使用高级词汇及句型。