随着私家车的普及,城市的交通堵塞越来越严重。最近,本市正在考虑学习伦敦和新加坡的经验,对城区的私家车辆另外收取一定的交通堵塞费用(a congestion fee),请你根据以下讨论的情况,写篇短文。 注意:词数:100一120,文章的开头已给出(不计词数)。
With the development of our society, more and more private cars stream onto the road,which brings a big problem to our city. So shall we charge the car drivers a congestion fee? |
With the development of our society, more and more private cars stream onto the road, which brings a big problem to our city. So shall the car drivers be charged congestion fee?
Some think it’s necessary to change the driver.It will be an effective way to control the number of private cars,which creates the traffic jams and air pollution we all suffer from.If they don't want to pay, they can take public transport instead.What's more, the money raised by the charge can be used to improve public transportation.
However, others are against it, They hold the view that people drive because they have to, for various reasons, And they have paid a lot for their cars: higher oil price, taxes, fees .The government should try to find another way to solve the problem , Besides, The congestion charging will damage the economy as shoppers may desert centers, As a result lots of money will be lost.
In my opinion , It will be an unfair burden for car-owners who already pay various taxes and fees, But I do hope the government can improve the public transportation first, if they found it convenient to go out with the help of public transportation they will surely have a better choice.
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