Some think sport does us good in many ways. Not only does sport help people to stay fit and healthy, but the competition and teamwork in sport give people a lot of motivation to keep going .  However , 0thers believe that sport is not the only way to do this. Eating well is a big part of a healthy life. On the other hand, sport can actually be dangerous. Millions of people are hurt playing sport each year.

From my perspective , sport teaches us big lessons for life. Most sports involve teamwork and teach us how to get along with others, how to work together to achieve a common goal, and about trust and responsibility. Truly, some sports do not suit some people, but there are so many possible choices that everyone can find a sport to enjoy.

题目分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是“Is sport really good for us?”，给出了大部分要点，还要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是运动的好处；，然后指出过度运动的坏处；最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。

点评：本文属于正反方观点作文，但是要点给出的不算多，需要考生自己添加部分。在分析部分已经详细说明了。在写作的时候要适合合适的连接词来连接各要点，使他们成为整体。要选择高级的词汇和句型，让文章有变化，有层次。