英国高中生Smith在互联网上登出启事(notice),希望结识一位中国朋友,以便学习中国的语言、文化。假设你是宜宾市一中学生李华,请在看到这则启事后,用英文给David 发出一封电子邮件。主要内容包括:
①.你怎样得知他的愿望②.你愿意成为他的朋友③.你本人基本情况④.你打算如何帮助他(至少两种途径)⑤你的愿望及盼望他的回复注意:
1.词数120词左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头句已写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear Smith,
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Yours
Li hua
One possible version:
Dear Smith,
I am Li Hua. I’m glad to read your notice on the Internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the a Chinese language and culture. I want to be your friend. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you. I study in No.1 Middle School of Yibin City and I am good at English.
I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails. What’s more, we can have chats on the Internet in Chinese or English and I’ll tell you the customs, the festivals, the foods, etc. of the Chinese. I hope we can keep in touch with each other.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目分析:本文是篇材料作文,材料描述很清楚,学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,本文要求写一封信作自我介绍,所以要用一般现在时。作自我介绍应该用第一人称。还要注意不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译,应该注意句子的变化和衔接,尽可能地运用较高级的句子和固定搭配,以提高作文的档次。最后要注意字数要求。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如 make friends with,in order to, introduce myself,look forward to等等;还运用了几个and 连接的并列句。并注意了句子的衔接如:What’s more 等。