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根据下列提示,写一篇介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平的文章。

1.袁隆平, 1937年9月7日出生在重庆的一个贫困农民家庭。

2.1953年毕业于西南农学院,毕业后被分配到湘西农校任教。

3.1964年开始从事水稻研究。1981年荣获我国第一个国家发明特等奖,被国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父”。

4.生活简朴,不计名利。

注意:

1. 词数120左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

答案

One possible version:

Yuan Longping

Born on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing, Yuan Longping was from a poor farmer’s family. Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan. He began his research in rice in 1964 and got the First National Special Prize for Invention in 1981. He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame.

题目分析:这是一篇关于人物介绍的书面表达。在介绍人物生平事迹时可以采用倒叙,插叙等写作手法以便使描叙更为生动。因为写作要点有明显的时间,所以本文也可以按照时间顺序组织材料,这样的文章显得条理清楚,脉络分明。在写作时还要注意介绍过去的事情要使用一般过去时,陈述现在的情况要用一般现在时态。此外,在行文时还要注意连接词的恰当使用以便使语言连贯,结构紧凑。

【亮点说明】范文短小精悍,要点全面。文章使用简洁的语言全面地介绍了这位著名的水稻专家---袁隆平。文中分词短语Born on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing,和 Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953,以及倒装句Famous as he is,的使用既避免了句式的单一,又使上下文衔接更为自然,结构更为紧凑。此外,本文按照时间的先后顺序安排材料,使得文章脉络非常清晰。

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