One possible version:

Recently a heated discussion about whether the school launch surveys on teachers among students was held in our class, about which there are different opinions.

65% of the students consider it meaningful. They hold the view that teachers will be more responsible afterwards and employ new methods to teach more efficiently. What’s more, teachers will treat students more kindly so that both sides will be in a more harmonious relationship.

However, others don’t think so. They say that some students tend to judge a teacher unfairly who is strict with them. Consequently, how can teachers keep their enthusiasm in their work? It’s likely that they will spoil the students, which may influence their growth in the long run.

Personally, such investigations can only be carried out when the school has done enough to make sure students assess their teachers objectively.

试题解析：从文章体裁分析，本文是一篇记叙文的写作，写的是一篇以“学校是否应该对老师进行民主测评”的主题班会，分别阐述支持和反对的理由以及作者的想法。

【亮点说明】

文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如about which there are different opinions.这是一个定语从句（介词 + which）；teachers will treat students more kindly so that both sides will be in a more harmonious relationship. （so that 引导的目的状语从句）；It’s likely that they will spoil the students, which may influence their growth in the long run，既有固定句型：it islikely that…,又有定语从句。并且主语了句子的衔接如：What’s more，However，Consequently Personally，等。