中学生是否有必要带手机去学校 文体：议论文 [题目要求] 现在， 很多学生带手机上学。为此， 某英语报在你校组织了一场讨论。 讨论的主题：中学生是否有必要带手机上学。 请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观的介绍讨论情况。
攀比：vie 追求时尚：follow the fashion Mobile Phones at school Dear Editor, _______________________________________________________________________ ___ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua |
One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.
The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone. And what’s more, it’s the latest fashion.
However, most teachers think middle school students are not old enough to control themselves. It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone. And it easily causes the students to vie with each other. If necessary, they could make phone calls by using public phones on the campus.
In my opinion, following the fashion is understandable. But as middle school students, we should put our heart into our studies.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
题目分析：本文要求写议论文，讨论的主题：中学生是否有必要带手机上学。 请根据表格提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观的介绍讨论情况。包括支持的、反对的和个人观点。客观的说明情况用一般现在时，而不用过去时。运用有关句式和一些高级词汇。还要注意不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译，和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文章层次清楚明白，第一段写写信的目的，第二、三段分别写赞成和反对的观点，最后是个人观点。文中应用了较复杂的句式，如定语从句、宾语从句和非谓语作主语等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：And what’s more，However, If necessary, In my opinion等等。