假设你是高三学生李华,最近,你了解到你校高一年级正在进行课改。现在请你用英语给校刊写一封信,谈谈你的感想。内容包括:
1.羡慕高一学生的缘由,
2.自己感到遗憾的方面,
3.课改对学生的益处,
4.学校在课改中应注意之处:
5.给高一学生的建议,
注意:1.词数100—120。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:课改—the curriculum reform
Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua, a senior three student in our school. Recently I’ve learnt that the Curriculum Reform is being carried out in senior one of our school. And I can’t help admiring those lucky students, for they have got the chance to do what they like. But to my regret, I had no choice but to learn what was provided by the school when I was in senior one. Even so, I still feel that the Curriculum Reform will certainly benefit students’ future development in a long term. From this aspect, I strongly advise them to make good use of this opportunity to develop ourselves. Meanwhile, I also hope that the school can find a proper balance between the development of students’ personal interest and their performance in the exam.
Wish the Curriculum Reform a success!
Yours sincerely
题目分析: 考察半开放性作文。在羡慕高一学生方面,可以从高一学生可以做自己喜欢的事情。自己感到遗憾的地方是自己在高一的时候没有机会来选择,只能完成学校所给的任务。课改对学生的好处是可以让学生有机会发展自己,多方面的提高自己的才干。建议学校要注意各方面的平衡,不能出现乱的情况。在写作时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】:范文中关于要点的说明很清晰,没有遗漏。在语言的运用上,充分运用了省略,如even so,这里使用so来代替上文出现的肯定句。连接词的使用较多,如Meanwhile等。高级词汇的运用上也有体现,如carry out, balance等等。