假如你是学生会 * * , 请根据下面图表, 1。用英语写一则秋游的通知。 回来后讨论。2.在山顶野餐, 要自带午餐和饮料。3.参加者在本周四前到学生会报名。 注意：1.通知必须包括表内所列内容, 可以适当调整内容的顺序和增加细节, 使其连贯, 完整。 2. 词数：100左右。3.通知时间 10月3日。 4. 生词：植物园the botanical garden; 报名sign up for; 学生会the Students’ Union.
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Notice October 3
The students of Senior Grade One will go out for a visit on October 3. We’ll first go to the museum to see an exhibition of Man and Nature. When you’re in the exhibition hall you should keep silent and make careful notes because we’re going to have a discussion after we come back. After that we plan to visit the botanical garden on the Quanshan Hill and have a picnic on the top of it. So please bring lunch and some drinking water with you.
Our school bus will leave at 7:20. Please gather at our school gate at 7:00a.m. Those who want to take part in the activity should sign up for it at the Students’ Union before Thursday.
题目分析：本文要求写一则秋游的通知，要把时间地点和注意事项写清楚。所以要用一般将来时或祈使句或情态动词表达应该怎么做。字数要求100词左右。注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了祈使句或情态动词表达要求做的事情，用will表示将要做。非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如keep silent，have a discussion 和take part in还运用了 who引导的定语从句等复合句。并注意了句子开头的变化和句子之间的衔接如用After that 、So等等。