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Wu Bin, a bus driver, was born in the city of Hangzhou in Zhejiang Province on March 8, 1965. Wu was driving his bus from Wuxi to Hangzhou around noon on May 29, 2012, when he was suddenly struck by a large piece of iron that came flying through the windscreen. Despite his obvious injuries, Wu Bin hit the brakes, shifted gears, pulled over the car gently and told his passengers not to wander onto the highway before collapsing from his injuries. His liver was damaged to pieces so severely that he ultimately died from his injuries. Wu's heroic actions have deeply moved the public and he is honored as the most beautiful driver.

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