Dear Mr. Steven,

I'm Li Hua from China and I'm writing to you to apply for the job as a volunteer for the coming London Olympic Games.

I'm a friendly and helpful boy/girl, and I'm active in taking part in volunteer activities. There will be less language difficulty for me because English is my favorite subject and I'm quite good at it. What's more. I’ll graduate from senior high this summer and I'll have proper time to work for the Olympics.

I'm crazy about sports and if I can get the opportunity, I'll try my best to serve for the Olympics. On the other side. I'm sure that I can benefit a lot from the volunteering job, such as making new friends, improving my communication skills and my oral English level. I'would appreciate it very much if I could be given the chance.

l'm looking forward to your early reply !

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua  

题目分析：本文讲述的是李华要成为志愿者所写的申请书。属于半开放性作文，使用的时态以一般现在时为主，使用第一人称。在自我介绍的时候，考生可以用自己或者身边一个有显著特点的人作为原型。在写作时，要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等

【亮点说明】本文中的高级句式使用较好，如I would appreciate it very much if I could be given the chance.中的I would appreciate it….；词汇的运用也很到位：apply for, look forward to等等；关联词的使用很合理如：What's more，On the other side.等等。