One possible version:

Dear Fred,

I’m glad to tell you that Justin Bieber, my favorite singer, will come to our city to perform next month.

I’m so pleased at the news that I decide to form a Justin Bieber fan club with some of my friends. All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic! His song makes us feel the true love. We can sing most of his songs and would like to know more about him. But we don’t know what we should do, and where we can pick up some useful information about him and his performing plans. Could you give us some advice?

Look forward to your reply.

Best wishes ,

Li Hua

题目分析：本文是篇材料作文，内容是贾斯汀·比伯下个月将到你市演出。近日你准备和几个朋友成立Justin Bieber的歌迷俱乐部。请你给你的加拿大笔友Fred发一封邮件，表明你们喜欢该歌手的理由(如：他很迷人，他的歌能让人感受到真爱等)，并希望Fred就如何办好歌迷俱乐部提出一些建议。根据内容应该用一般现在时，介绍Justin，请求对方提建议用提建议的词和短语。注意增加细节，使衔接合理，还要尽量用高中阶段学习词汇和句型。注意长短搭配。

【亮点说明】本文结构明确，思路清晰。分三段把内容要点都涵盖了。同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如，pick up，Look forward to还运用了news后跟了同位语从句说明内容、 宾语从句等较复杂的句子。并注意了句子的衔接如：But，and等等。