一年一度的校园文化节又拉开了序幕,但今年学生却没有表现出像往年的兴趣和热情。面对这一现象,有人提出校园文化节还要不要举办的问题,这引起了同学们的讨论。上周末你班也进行了一场讨论。请你根据下面表格所提供的内容将讨论结果做一总结并发表自己的观点,字数120左右。
To be continued or not? The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again.____________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ |
Some students believe that campus cultural festival can offer a wonderful stage for students to show their talents. Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, a serious of activities also enrich the campus culture and make campus atmosphere more active. However, some students hold different views. They emphasize that they have been kept busy with their study and have no time to spare for the activities of the campus cultural festival. They also state that they cannot benefit much from some activities, which, in their opinion, have little to do with their study.
From my opinion of view, holding the campus cultural festival is a must. On the one hand, more students will be motivated to develop their potential abilities which will make them qualified for their future positions. On the other hand, students will find it a good chance to relax themselves as well as gain much knowledge that can’t be found in the book.
题目分析:题目要求根据表格提示,将“校园文化节还要不要举办”这一话题的讨论结果总结一下,并给出自己的观点。作文可以分为三部分,支持者的观点;反对者的观点;自己的看法。写作时注意时态、人称、拼写和标点的正确使用。
【亮点说明】范文使用了较多的宾语从句,如believe that..., emphasize that..., state that...等;
范文使用了较多的短语,如offer... for sb, Apart from, a serious of, been kept busy with, benefit from, From my opinion of view, find it a good chance to relax, as well as等,使作文变得充实;
范文注意使用Apart from, However, On the one hand, On the other hand等来衔接句子与段落,使作文衔接紧密;
范文还使用了定语从句which, in their opinion, have little to do with their study和which will make them qualified for their future positions及that can’t be found in the book,使作文句式多样,灵活运用语法知识的能力较强。
范文中的must意为“必不可少的事”。