Dear Nick,

I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August. You’ve made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.

Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lake of which the water is clear and looks colourful. It can excite visitors’ imagination. Another attraction is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It was built over 2, 000 years ago and it still plays an important part in irrigation today. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I’m sure you will have a good time.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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