My favorite sport

Though there are different kinds of sports, swimming is my favorite. It was a very exciting experience to learn swimming with my parents when I was five years old.

Swimming is a really good sport. It makes me feel relaxed. This sport can make me stay healthy and strong, because I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming.

Before going to swim, we should pay attention to three points. The first is to make your body in a better state. The second is that do not eat too much. The last is that you had better swim with some friends. These can help you stay safe and enjoy yourself.

题目分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要阐述自己的观点，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：pay attention to注意，stay safe保持安全，范文中的句式多变，运用不同的语法知识：  Though there are different kinds of sports, swimming is my favorite. It was a very exciting experience to learn swimming with my parents when I was five years old.这句话用了it做形式主语， This sport can make me stay healthy and strong, because I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming.这句话用了every time引导时间状语从句， The first is to make your body in a better state.这句话用了不定式做表语， The second is that do not eat too much. The last is that you had better swim with some friends. 这两句话用了表语从句。