随着社会对“富二代”各方面负面新闻不断的报道。最近你校学生就“金钱是否能带来幸福” 这一话题进行了一场激烈的辩论,辩论的结果如下表所示:
注意:1.词数 100 左右 2.开头已给出,但不计入总词数; 3.不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥,以行文连贯。 Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ |
Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness. Different students have different opinions.
Some students think that money is so important that we couldn’t survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition , it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life.
Others, however, have opposite opinion. They think money doesn’t mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life.
Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.
题目分析:本书面表达是一篇议论文方面的写作,议论性作文的结构:1. 开门见山地点明所要阐述的内容。2. 分析不同的观点:可采用分类式或对比式,并阐明理由。要注意层次清楚条理清晰。3. 归纳总结或发表评论。考生在写作之前必修认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态。不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如help sb. do,allow sb to do,live a … life,for example, attach … to …,in this way;还运用句型nor引导的部分倒装句,only放句首引导的倒装结构等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:besides, in addition, however, for example, personally等等。