Dear Jim,

How are things going?

On November 21st, 2008 I went to a concert held in the Capital Stadium. The concert was given by Emil Chau, a singer from Taiwan. Chau was born in Hongkong in December, 1960 and showed his music talent at an early age. His first album came out in 1984. Since then he has made many albums and has continued giving great performances on stage at home and abroad. His song “Friend” became well-known to each household.

Throughout the concert, there was not an empty seat anywhere in the Stadium, and the atmosphere was extremely exciting. The audience sang along to nearly every song.

I was greatly impressed by Chau’s brilliant music and singing. While I watched and listened, I knew that I was seeing the performance of a real superstar. This s the best concert that I will remember forever.

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题目分析：

本文属于提纲类短文，叙述作者在2008年11月21日观看了周华健Emil Chau的个人演唱会。属于记叙文，要使用第一人称和过去时。

要点：1. 2008年11月21日你观看了周华健Emil Chau的个人演唱会，这是你平生第一次亲临现场，它给你留下了深刻的印象。2. 1960年12月出生在香港；从小有音乐天赋；3.1984年出第一张专辑，在后来的二十几年的歌坛生涯中，出版许多专辑并在国内外举办多场演唱会。“朋友”是他最受欢迎的歌曲之一。4. 2008年11月21日，首都体育馆 the Capital Stadium

座无虚席；观众齐唱；整场气氛热烈；5.个人感受：对于这次演唱会感觉很好，留下了深刻的印象。

提纲类作文要根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】：本文最大的特点在于要点的安排，整个文章分为了4段。第一段是书信的基本格式，从第二段开始是对周华健个人情况的介绍，按照时间顺序来安排要点。第三段结束演唱会的情况，最后一段介绍个人感受。整个文章显得很紧凑。