假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,下个月英国Saint Gorge High School的交换学生要来你校学习。学校招募接待家庭。请你根据以下信息,提出申请并说明理由。
1. 家里住宿条件好;
2. 英语听说能力强;
3. 了解英国人的文化习俗。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to host a student from Saint George High School. My house is big enough to give him a room to live in. Also, I am good at English listening and speaking. I have studied a lot about British culture and customs. I can create a welcoming atmosphere for him. I would be very happy, if you give me this opportunity.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
题目分析:这是一篇提纲类书面表达,文章的要点也基本上都给出来了,而且很具体,考生要把要点解释清楚,不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。因为是书信,所以本篇作文在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了好的词组和句子:be good at 擅长于,create a welcoming atmosphere My house is big enough to give him a room to live in. 这句话用了不定式做定语, I would be very happy, if you give me this opportunity.这句话用了条件状语从句。