Put an end to waste on campus

Nowadays wasting is common on campus. Water, electricity, paper and food are habitually wasted among many students, which, worse still, some of them consider acceptable.

If every student wastes a gram of rice and throws away a piece of paper every day, the total waste would be beyond our imagination. We all know that resources are running out. Even small resources, when used well, can help meet needs and aid development.

However, it’s easier said than done. Sometimes I myself waste money buying too much food. And there’re times I forget to turn off the lights before leaving the classroom. To change it, first, I’ll strengthen my responsibility to save resources, making the most of water, electricity and paper. Second, I’ll learn to save money, trying to be an economist. （124words）

题目分析：题目要求根据主题“杜绝校园浪费”（Put an end to waste on campus）写一篇短文，写作要点已经给出，需要学生用自己的语言形成连贯的文章。首先，描述浪费现象；其次说明浪费的危害；最后提出改进措施。使用第一人称进行写作，注意拼写、标点和时态的正确使用。

【亮点说明】范文使用了一些重要语法知识：定语从句which, worse still, some of them consider acceptable；宾语从句We all know that resources are running out；省略when used well；非谓语动词To change it, making the most of water, electricity and paper和trying to be an economist；谚语it’s easier said than done；固定搭配waste money buying too much food等，使作文的等级得到了提升；

范文使用了较多的短语：throws away, a piece of, worse still, beyond our imagination, meet needs, turn off等，充实了作文的内容；

范文注意使用However, first, Second等来衔接上下文；使作文在结构上显得紧凑。

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