假定你是李津。作为高~新生,你升入耀华中学后已经在这里学习和生活了近一个学期,对各个方面都有所感触。现请你用英文给在Australia的一位笔友Tracy写一封信,分享以下几点内容:
1.学校是当地优秀学校。校园美丽,学习环境优良,社团多样,活动众多;
2.同学学习勤奋,互助友爱;
3.教师工作认真负责,……(其他方面如对待学生等);
4.目前的困难……;
5.今后一段时期的目标和构想。
注意:l.词数不少于100:
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tracy,
How are you recently?____________________________________________________________
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How are you getting on? Please write back as soon as possible.
Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
Dear Tracy,
How are you recently? I have studied in Yaohua High School, which is among the top local schools, as a freshman for more than 2 months and I cannot wait to share my feelings with you.
Our school is an ideal place to live and study in. There are beautiful pants, and nice flowers. Moreover , we have a variety of societies to choose and activities to join in.
I have friendly classmates who are hard-working and kind to each other. Our teachers, who are always ready to help us with our studies, are very professional and strict in their work.
At present, however, I am not doing well in maths. And there is still some time before I can be really independent. But I have talked it with my teacher and I will try my best to catch up with others and learn to live by myself in the future.
How are you getting on? Please write back as soon as possible.
Best wishes.
Sincrerly yours,
Li Jin
题目分析:这是一篇话题类作文。假定你是李津。作为高~新生,你升入耀华中学后已经在这里学习和生活了近一个学期,对各个方面都有所感触。现请你用英文给在Australia的一位笔友Tracy写一封信,分享以下几点内容: 1.学校是当地优秀学校。校园美丽,学习环境优良,社团多样,活动众多;2.同学学习勤奋,互助友爱;3.教师工作认真负责,……(其他方面如对待学生等);4.目前的困难……;5.今后一段时期的目标和构想。需要写的内容已经粗略给出,需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子,适当添加些内容,使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右,不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】I have studied in Yaohua High School, which is among the top local schools, as a freshman for more than 2 months and I cannot wait to share my feelings with you.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句;I have friendly classmates who are hard-working and kind to each other.这里含有一个定语从句;Our teachers, who are always ready to help us with our studies, are very professional and strict in their work. 这里含有一个定语从句。