随着人们生活水平的提高,越来越多的人拥有了自己的汽车。你班同学就此展开讨论,提出两种不同的观点和看法。请你根据所提供的信息给报社写一封信,客观介绍这两种看法。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars. _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua |
With the development of people’s living conditions, more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car. Firstly, it’s a convenient, fast, and comfortable means of transportation. Secondly, it shows that people are becoming richer, and the country much more stronger. It also makes relative businesses and industries develop faster.
Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents. Besides, overloaded parking cars is another big problem.
In my view, people should think carefully before they buy a car.
题目分析:本篇写作题材是对于越来越多的人拥有了自己的汽车的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰,四段:第一段为总述;第二段正方观点及依据;第三段反方观点及依据;第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化;2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断,要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。
【亮点说明】这篇文章很明显的特点是关联词的使用:Firstly, Secondly, Besides。词组有:give off 排放,In my view在我看来,have some bad effects 有坏的影响,句式比较简单:Some of us think it’s good to own a car. 这句话用了it做形式主语。